“I want you to know that you brought this upon yourself,” said Valaran.
Short, but sweet. This week, after some last minute (after the deadline) feedback from my insightful beta readers, I finished polishing Bloodlust: Will to Power and sent it to edit. I have mixed feelings. I could literally spend another year polishing and re-writing and still want to do more. I’m not sure it would make it better though. The language would be more refined, the scenes that I want to highlight would have every ounce beauty teased out of them. I’m just not sure that that would make the book better. Bloodlust: Will to Power is more emotional, and perhaps better served by a slightly less refined, raw style.
At least that’s what I tell myself… the readers will decide.